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Dr Jim Allen Toronto / Canada, Male, 27
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  • POEM: At 2: 39 Am by kibrom habtu (10/23/2011 6:10:00 PM)

    Bit of a melodrama dude...lighten up...

  • POEM: The Pessimist by David Beckham (3/2/2011 4:57:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed this poem. One piece of constructive criticism though, you use 'low hanging' to describe both the moon and the hills. My advise would be to use another term to demonstrate the contrast between hills and mountains, which evidently was what you were trying to accomplish, and did no doubt, but that repetition just seems tiresome to me. Again, nice poem man!

  • POEM: The Man Behind The Dark Glasses by David Beckham (3/2/2011 4:35:00 PM)

    Beautiful! Very nice, truly poetic prose.

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