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Michelle Slaney Tampa / United States, Female, 29
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  • POEM: My Mistake by Michelle Dominique Augustyn (7/18/2010 7:40:00 PM)

    I like this piece. I love the way the speaker questions their feelings for the other because in some situations, like one I have been in, the mind tells you to feel what the heart wont, and where the distinction is between the two, you just don't know.

  • POEM: S(U) Mmer by James Enoch (7/18/2010 7:10:00 AM)

    I like this piece! I like how there is a progressiveness of thought in the piece in what the speaker longs for, from a dejected state of mind to a somewhat hopeful tone. I love the personification of summer and winter as well. Well done amigo! Cheers.

  • POEM: Real Bundle Of Joy by David Beckham (7/13/2010 8:10:00 PM)

    This is such a phenomenal piece. I am pleased to read that you received that long awaited bundle of joy, your child. As for the poem, it was wonderful to read and feel the tug of anticipation and relief.

    Love the imagery you invoke with this stanza:
    'Noble Men in white gowns, try their tricks
    To our tents with best of hopes, we dispatch
    The guinea pigs of science your mother have become
    On this life's_pee_ stick_ checker, we set our hopes'

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