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  • POEM: Never Forget by Tiana Webb (4/5/2012 4:09:00 AM)

    i agree with adam there is emotion but your repetitionin the lines-you showed me.... are not easy on the tongue and are burdensome to mental flexibility. the reason for rhyme is to repeat acceptably in sound not word. so tiana enrich your word scope...and look into mastering your lyrical approach make it deeper than this and never know you will be a sought out songwriter...

  • POEM: Thank You by Tiana Webb (4/5/2012 4:00:00 AM)

    tiana have considered looking into lyrical poetry- it seems to suites your mind set may be for now as you grow you will find that focus to which you can stand claim. otherwise the poem has lines that have been reiterated by others and unsurprisingly the same way

  • POEM: My Angel by Tiana Webb (4/5/2012 3:48:00 AM)

    tiana such a lovely name resonates in memory to the noun-tiara. i would muse so ever calmly.
    if i were to write a poem about you as my new found love these are the lines you would see.. the point is when the message intended is at heart summary is key if you are to call it a poem- otherwise it turns into a lyric or diary.

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