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Matthew Merlino Honolulu / Mongolia, Male, 34
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    • POEM: 40,000 by Charles Bukowski (9/10/2010 4:10:00 PM)

      I don't believe this is the full poem.

    • POEM: 40,000 by Charles Bukowski (9/9/2010 6:52:00 PM)

      'feel that i see that love is here'

      Ruins the rhythm of the second stanza with its awkwardness.

      'i will take morning after all
      if night is proved to be worthwhile
      and care not if i shall recall
      your smile was not your smile '

      A powerful and well written stanza.