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Christopher Wingate Baltimore / United States, Male, 35
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  • POEM: Wingless Angels by Kayla Daley (4/19/2011 8:44:00 PM)

    Things I like:
    Coherent message - This writer of this poem is expressing their belief that there are those on this planet that spread joy. They are, however, in need of fellow 'angels'; since they are only human.

    Good flow - The flow of this poem is great; especially the way the writer repeated the word 'need.'

    Things That Need Work:

    Flow of last few lines need work - 'Because they are only humans trying for God to do the right things' is a bit of a run-on and detracts from the flow of the next line.

    'But at least they try, even if they are just wingless beings' - I think the flow of this line would be improved immensely if you removed the words: at, even, if, they, are and just; or perhaps cut down on most of them.

    Overall impression: Great piece that I enjoyed reading. It was strong with both emotion and direction. Great work and keep writing!