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Lariel Morihsta Selangor / Malaysia, Female, 38
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Eating Rosebuds
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Literature
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  • (8/24/2011 9:25:00 AM)

    i could feel the motherly love for her child in your poem, great work in playing with words and expressions in them, but try to rhyme it, good job and keep it up ^_^

  • POEM: An Unborn Child's Poem by Esther Ayala (8/24/2011 9:17:00 AM)

    First of all, sorry if im very straight forward. But i am true to my words.
    This poem that you wrote is indeed very touching and inspiring, but from the start to the end, i feel as though i am reading a long length story in a book. if you can, try to improve it, using words that people dont often use and yet can make them feel your poem's expression. Because every poem has an expression and can be shown by words. I hope you understand what i mean, cause what you are trying to say here is very touching, and would be a strong poem...keep it up ^_^

  • POEM: Doesnt Understand by Nissa Armstrong (7/22/2011 11:40:00 PM)

    it is really good, i love it

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