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    • POEM: An Inevitable Reunion by adam quinones (11/21/2011 10:09:00 AM)

      You are definitely laying your heart out on paper. A little tweaking will go a long way.

      You'll need a little editing on this one. 'I will wait to with you' just isn't English. Maybe 'I will wait to be with you, reunited.'

      You've got some other areas you need some grammar help.

      Your efforts to rhyme force you to make some awkward word choices.

      You could use a little more imagery. Too much telling us how you feel and not enough showing us what it's like to feel that way.