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M.l.. Emmett
M.l.. Emmett Norwood, South Australia / Australia, Female, 65
Profession :
Writer, poet, editor & reviewer
Education :
University of Adelaide
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M.l.. Emmett's last comments on poems and poets

  • (8/5/2012 11:24:00 AM)

    You can tell narratives in poems but you need to write it unlike PROSE. Too much grammatical integrity and not enough imagery - metaphor?
    It is not just noise is it? It's light too...

  • (8/5/2012 11:21:00 AM)

    Too many rhetorical questioning for me.
    Do you believe in God?
    I don't so I may not be the right person to criticise

  • (8/5/2012 11:19:00 AM)

    The idea is good and three lines is a skill, but this has no elements of Haiku (some syllabic similarlity but no Season or turning point) which I assume is NOT what you intended. Moth - flame- engulf is the movement / progress of the lines - but you might be able to excite the image away from the basic knowledge which is so well known.
    Offered in good faith

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