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  • POEM: I Am A Raindrop by Sandra Conner (11/9/2012 10:49:00 PM)

    I must say I really liked this, bubbly and vibrant from the view of something so simple as a raindrop; a little bit childish, but I guess it adds to the positive atmosphere of the plop. :)

  • POEM: I Am A Raindrop by Sandra Conner (11/8/2012 4:46:00 PM)

    Of what little poetry there is its nice, got a rhythm straight away and it flows very nicely. Shame you didn't expand and carry on the momentum from my point of view: /.

  • POEM: Nature's Music by S. D. Smith (11/8/2012 4:43:00 PM)

    The imagery is awesome, just vivid enough, but room for imagination of my own. Found it hard to get a rhythm while reading, but no biggy if you weren't going for one :)

    I like anything on the concept of the world and or nature, and it does speak well for the seasons and cycles your portraying.

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