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Søren Valentine
The City of Tombs / New Zealand, Male, 24
- Profession :
- Mediocre Linguist
- Education :
- Various
About Me : I like to write. Simple. My life is rather interesting. Uhm... I have trust issues but lets not get into that. Your welcome. Im very symbolic and I loooooooovvvvvveeeee ... more »
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5/20/2013 7:43:00 AM
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Latest 5 Poems of Søren Valentine
- 11/27/2013 La Moribunda (The Withered One)
- 4/25/2013 Passively Tearing Me Asunder
- 4/11/2013 Cambre And Arielle (...
- 4/4/2013 Arielle's Awakening
- 2/26/2013 Verdant Blade - A Haiku
Alex Manson
Aria Siren
Colby Leighton
Sandy Player
Oi mate this is really good! I like the picture of counting the stars, they are special to me.
Also, I absolutely love the imagery of flower petals floating ever so gently on a river of pain knowing that is isn't gentle at all. Every ripple that petal causes will bring so much back, and like you mentioned, those petals come back later on.
I really liked this!
Hmm. This poem is very good. It is only the second one I've read and I already know you are a great writer. Therefore, you have much potential.
I'll probably find the answer to this enquiry as I read on, but have you tried writing without rhyming? I think you'd be good at it. But what do I know?
Thanks for sharing.
Sorry if I seem too abrasive. I'm just honest... not to cause offence.
Anyway, sigues escribiendo!
þakka þér!
... must you torture us so? Brilliant, simply brilliant.