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Shaun York Springs / United States, Male, 30
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  • POET: Kundan Ahuja (12/29/2013 8:10:00 PM)

    I love it. I especially like the cadence of the words and the last paragraph in particular. The format is also very nice.

  • POET: Katherine Patrick (12/29/2013 8:05:00 PM)

    I'm not sure exactly how I feel about the pom but the idea seems very strong. This is completely my opinion, but it might be better if the emotion behind the poem was exposed more by changing up the spacing and format of the poem as well as changing the pace using long and short words for the rhythm you want.